Wednesday, January 23, 2013

WEDNESDAY- JANUARY 23- 
THEME
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THEME:  The theme of a story is what the author is trying to get you to learn- it is a lesson, a moral, an essential message about life.

A theme is a story’s message. It is what the author of a piece of text wants you to remember most. The theme of a fable is its moral. The theme of a parable is its teaching. The theme of a piece of fiction is its view about life and how people behave.

Many people confuse the theme with the subject of the story, but a theme is more abstract than the subject. The theme of a story is the idea that holds the story together. In essence, a theme is the main idea or some type of lesson or message that the author wants to convey to the reader.  For example, the great novel, Little Women, is about four sisters, but that is the subject of the book. One of the themes is the struggles of young girls maturing into women. A story can have more than one theme. Though themes might be difficult to find, there are some ways to identify them.  

CHALLENGE:  Using the eight identified vocabulary words and the four story-starter plot facts, compose a short story with a theme, which holds the story together.  Post your team story.

Plot Story-Starter
1.  Jonas is frightened when he sees a plane.
2.  Jonas is apprehensive about the month of December.
3.  Lily shares her feeling of anger regarding a boy who visits from a neighboring community and breaks the play area rules. 
4.  The community believes that bad feelings will lead people to make unwise decisions.

VOCABULARY:  beckoning, disposition, distraught, ironic, intrigued, jeering, palpable, wheedle

 
 

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  1. Team 5-Period 2 Once in a small quiet town there was a very destructive kid named Jonas.One day he was going to the park and a girl named Lily was angry at Jonas for throwing the swing up too high once again and she was seething. Then started making beckonings and jeering sounds and movements for him to go away fast. He felt terrible and ran away. While running, he stopped to catch his breath and heard a loud noise, he looked up and saw a nightmarish airplane. He ran again, but faster, as if his feet were not palpable to the ground. While Jonas was running away, Lily was distraught about him breaking the rules and then wants to go to the community service of the park grounds, and talk about Jonas’s bearing. The people were intrigued hearing all of this, that they wheedled themselves to find him and talk to him. Jonas ran as fast as he can, then saw a vehicle come to a halt in his tracks. Jonas thought this was ironic and made no sense. The people from the community service put him in the car and drove him back to the park. It was the month of December when he swung the swing too high and broke it, which was ironic because he is apprehensive of the month of December. Everybody thought he was a inferior influence, but after he saw his disposition and then on they enlightened him on how to be a better kid.

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  2. Team 1. Period 2.

    Jonas is flying to see his grandparents for Christmas. He is Palpable about riding the plane in the month of December because of the snowstorm. People wheedle him into riding the plane. Some people are jeering at him to hurry him up in the line. And then Jonas distraught because people were being rude to him. Jonas’ family takes him to the play area in the airport. Lily his friend is there. Jonas’ continues playing and Lily starts beckoning!! Well this is Lily’s disposition. She has ADHD. Jonas goes to see Lily and Jonas is intrigued her to wonder why she is screaming. Then Jonas yells back “This is Ironic.” The community airport thinks that bad decisions will lead to a horrible life.

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  3. Team #2 period 2~
    Jonas is apprehensive about December. He has very bad memories of the month of December, it is the month his parents died in a plane crash. He has been afraid of planes since that day, he’s unable to even look at a plane without remembering the horror he felt when he heard the news. Every time someone asks him to ride a plane, he wheedles his way out of it with excuses of “I have homework”, or “I get plane sick easy.” One day when playing at the play area, a plane flew overhead. Another kid at the play area, one from out of town, noticing his fear, started jeering at him. Lily, a kind girl by disposition, hearing this, sensing Jonas’s distraught, and who doesn’t like people breaking the rules, rushed to the boy and smacked him for making fun of jonas. The air was almost palpable with the tension. Lily yells at the boy, “All the adults believe that bad feelings will lead people to make unwise decisions.” “Do you want to make bad decisions, and go to jail? That would be ironic since your dad is a policeman. Now apologize!” So, the boy apologizes to Jonas. Lily beckons Jonas over. Lily then asks Jonas about his fear of planes, intrigued as she was. Jonas says that his parents were killed in a plane crash, so now he is terrified of planes. Lily says she is sorry and hopes that Jonas and her can be good friends. Jonas says he hopes so too.

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  4. Team 7 period 2-Jonas gets distraught when he sees an airplane, when Jonas perceive an airplane, the air gets palpable. He doesn’t get intrigued about the month of December. He doesn’t assume its ironic. Lily is jeering because the child breaks the rules. She also starts beckoning at the child. The child thinks he can wheedle his way out of annoyance. The association thinks that the kids will lose good qualities and inherit these bad disposition skills that they are breaking.

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  5. Group 6 period 2 Jonas was the boy who was terrified planes, he got nervous every time he saw an airplane.While he is in class he is distraught because bullies might pick on him. It was ironic that he had to sit by the bullies in class.He has never told anybody that he is afraid of planes besides his best friend. There his friend tells people that he is fearful of planes and bullies start jeering about him. Now he has to weedle to the airport. Then his mom was palpable that he is terrified of planes. Then his mom was disposition about him and planes. Then his mom intrigued him about not going to the airport. His mom is beckoning him to get on the plane. Then it was ironic that he got on the plane.When he arrived at Florida he didn’t feel so happy about what had happen. So he did not obey the rules at the park and Lily became angry and was upset at him. Every Time he went to the park, he wouldn’t share anything, and he would use the playground in a wrong way. So then Lily shares her feeling of regarding a boy who visits from a neighboring community and disregards the play area rules. They start talking about that boy and they go talk to the mom. The mom is pretty upset with him and calls him downstair. While they are talking to the boy they notice that the boy was through a lot of sorrowful things. Jonas was telling them the story about him and what was going on on his old school. Not even his mom knew so she was very astonished. Jonas apologized of what he did and said he would never do it again. The community believes that bad feelings will lead people to make unwise decisions. So they do forgive him. His mom tells him that he always needs to speak up before he makes a bad decision.

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  6. Lily was walking through the park when she saw Jonas. Lily was distraught because Jonas always breaks the play area rules. But Jonas was just intrigued. Lily was beckoning to Jonas for him to come near her. Then Jonas started jeering her because he didn’t want to go near her. Lily started to wheedle Jonas so he would come to her. Jonas was in a palpable reach. Lily was going to grab him and tell him not to break the rules. But then she saw his parents who were breaking the rules. She knew his disposition came from his parents. -GROUP 3, PERIOD 2

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  8. Team 7- Period 3
    Jonas was on the playground on a cold December day and was distraught because he saw a plane up in the air and his disposition was just sad to look at.He was palpable by his mother and Lily tried to Wheedle him to come inside.Jonas was jeering cause he didn’t want to because he was mad.He was Beckoning and pouting and it was Ironic how he wanted to be on a plane.His mom then came out and said just because you can’t be up in the plane doesn't mean you have to be mad...Jonas was INTRIGUED but he finally went inside with Lily and his Mom and he went to his room and cried and had eventually went to sleep.His Mom came in and said “You know we could always go on a trip...On a plane :)”He woke up and and thanked his mom so much because he’s always wanted to go on plane and look down at all of the little things.

    The lesson was that if you wait long enough something good will happen.

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  9. Jonas is frightened when he sees his plane ticket to visit his grandma’s for Christmas. The next day he was pondering if he should go on the plane. “Jonas COME DOWN HERE” screeched Jorina his mother. He anxiously crawled down the prominent stairs. On the drive over he shuddered when they passed the airport. When he walked in he was almost rasping for air. His mom Jorina helped him recollect himself.
    Jonas is apprehensive about the month of December because he has never traveled on a plane before and is scared. The week before they were to fly his sister Lily was watching the news. Lily shared her anger when she see’s that a boy from the community center broke the playground rules. He arrives at the airport and finally gets over his fear of flight. He was anxiously waiting for his plane to land so he can see his grandma.
    GROUP 6- Period 2

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  10. Team 7- Period 3
    Jonas was on the playground on a cold December day and was distraught because he saw a plane up in the air and his disposition was just sad to look at.He was palpable by his mother and Lily tried to Wheedle him to come inside.Jonas was jeering cause he didn’t want to because he was mad.He was Beckoning and pouting and it was Ironic how he wanted to be on a plane.His mom then came out and said just because you can’t be up in the plane doesn't mean you have to be mad...Jonas was INTRIGUED but he finally went inside with Lily and his Mom and he went to his room and cried and had eventually went to sleep.His Mom came in and said “You know we could always go on a trip...On a plane :)”He woke up and and thanked his mom so much because he’s always wanted to go on plane and look down at all of the little things.

    The lesson was that if you wait long enough something good will happen.

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  11. Jonas is distraught of planes because the first plane he flew on nearly crashed,in the month of December.His friend lilly went to the hospital to see how he was. He beckoned her next to him and she told him the palpable story of the boy who broke the playground rules while he was very intrigued and was jeering the entire time. He was very intrigued When this happened lily was very Distraught. Due to this action, The community believes that bad feelings will lead people to make unwise decisions. Two years later jonas got a job in Spain so he had to fly there.Then he remembered that day in December when the plane almost crashes and had the fear of it doing it again. He had to make a decision on whether or not to face his fear and get the job that he was always intrigued with. He ended up going to Spain because his mom wheedled him into the ironic situation.


    TEAM 2 PERIOD 3

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  12. Jonas was riding his bike at the peak of december he was riding his bike to the mom was on the plane. He rushed to the airport, desperate to see his mother she was very palpable after her business trip. After they got home from the airport they went over to his aunts house and once they were here he ran up the stairs to see his cousin Lylie. She must have been distraught because she was jeering at him. Jonas asked her what was amatar she said that there were kids that were breaking the play ground rules. Jonas thought it was ironic because the community said that people were making the wrong choices Jonases mom beckoned them to eat dinner. Jonas, and Lylie head out to go to the playground and played some baseball. They saw the kids and they were caught they tried to intrigue them but it didn’t work Lylie and Jonas caught them Lylie wanted to teach them a lesson but Jonas said to just tell the community. Just because they have a disposition doesn’t mean they can't get along. That was a good day!



    Theme
    To always be there for your friend or family member to give them advice and Love and be there when they need it.

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  13. Team 5 and Period 3

    Jones is distraught when he sees a plane because he is afraid of hights. He is also very anxious about december because he will be attending his grandfather’s funeral. He thought it was ironic because winter was his grandfather’s favorite season.The tension between his family members was palpable. His mother was beckoning him to get on the plane. He appeared to have a calm disposition but on the inside he was terrified.His brother was jeering at him from across the aisle, he had wheedled the fact of his phobia out of him years ago.

    When they got off the plane and arrived at his grandmother's house, he meet a girl named Lily. While they played Jonas told Lily that he was afraid of heights and Lily was intrigued by the fact that Jonas was afraid of heights. The played all morning but Lily got mad at him because he broke the play area rules.

    When she pushed him he fell over the railing and hung on with one hand. While she ran to get help he looked down and tried not to vomit. Lily came back with his parents and a ladder of the community was afraid that Jonas parents would sue they so they promised to put high rails on the playground to prevent this from happening again. Lily and her parents went with Jonas and his parents to the airport when Jonas looked out of the window when the plane was in the air he found that he was not afraid of hights anymore thanks to Lily.

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  14. Team 5 period 4
    Jonas is a boy that doesn’t like planes and hates the month of December because he thinks bad things happen in December! It was ironic that he didn’t like planes when his dad was a pilot. His mom was always beckoning him to go on vacation to Florida by taking a plane, and he was distraught about it. His parents were always jeering him about being afraid. He had a frightened disposition about the vacation. His parents would always wheedle him about it. So then he ran away to the next town over, and went to the playground. He didn’t know there were rules to the playground. The next day, Lily, a girl that lives in the next town over, saw that he broke the rules to the playground. It was very palpable that he broke the rules. She was intrigued that he would do something like that. Jonas broke the monkey bars. She saw him at the playground the next day sleeping. She talked to him. He said that he was very mad. She asked him to please not do that again, but he wouldn’t. He kept breaking the rules. Eventually, he ended up having to pay a fine for the things he broke. The community asked him why he did it and he said that he was mad because his parents were making him go on a plane, and the community thought they it would be something like that because bad feelings will lead people to make unwise decisions. Then, he realized he should start listening to people when they tell them things. Jonas always tried to take people’s advice from then on.

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    1. The theme of the story is to follow the rules and you will not get into trouble.

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    2. Team 1 Period 4

      The theme of this short story is, "Think about the consequences before you do something bad".

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  15. Team 1 Period 4

    It was an amazing November afternoon at the playground next to the airport. Jonas was very apprehensive about the month of December. He feared December sixth, when he would be riding the plane down to Florida to see his grandparents. One day at the park, Jonas was eating banana runts and running around the playground. Lily, Jonas’ best friend, saw Jonas running and eating the candy. Lily beckoned him to come to her and stop running with candy in his mouth, which was a violation of the park rules. Jonas would not stop running. Then Jonas made a jeering remark that made Lily distraught. It was palpable that she was furious. Lily tried to wheedle Jonas to stop running with the candy in his mouth and to come over to her. He refused to stop.

    At the next community meeting, Lily shared her anger about Jonas with them. The next time she went to the park, she saw Jonas, once again running around with candy in his mouth. Then Lily had a great idea. How ironic it is that my grandfather is an airplane pilot, since Jonas is afraid of planes, thought Lily. Since her grandfather was probably not working today, she called him on her cell phone. She arranged for her grandfather to fly the plane right over the playground. The next day at the park, Jonas looked up at the sky and became intrigued by what looked like an airplane. Jonas became frightened. His usually calm disposition became frantic. The airplane flew right over his head, frightening him thoroughly. He ran all the way back home, promising himself that he would never go back to that park, which was Lily’s plan. Jonas never ran around with candy in his mouth at the park ever again.

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    2. The theme of this short story is listen to your friend when it will save your life.

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    3. Listen to your friends when they're trying to tell you something.

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    4. The them of the story,Listen to the people around you

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  16. Team 7 Period 4 Keirstin,Amy,Brandi
    It is December, cold and snowing many children in the community are building snowmen.Children are beckoning their parents with screams of joy and the snowmen they built.In the community there are parents that are disposition wood into their woodburner.Lily and Jonas were on the playground when Jonas threw a fit because he is apprehensive about the month of December.Lily shares her anger to him and says that he should be happy not mad.Lily was distraught at Jonas.Jonas only wanted a friend and he is ironic.Children were intrigued when Jonas and Lily were jeering at each other.When Jonas saw a plane it was palpable when he ran around the playground breaking the toys.The community saw this and gossiped to each other that bad feelings will lead people to make unwise decisions.The parents of Jonas wheedle him to go home.Everyone went home wondering what happened to Jonas.

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    2. The theme of this story is expect the unexpected.

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    3. The theme of the story is to not make unwise decisions.

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  18. Jonas and his parents are packing for a trip to Honolulu due to the fact that Jonas and his parents are apprehensive about the month of December. As Jonas packs for Hawaii he forgot to tell his prominent friend Lily that he is leaving for Hawaii. As Jonas leaves their driveway in a neon green lamborghini. Jonas arrives at the airport feeling anxious and shutters when he perception an astronomic airplane overhead. Lily ponders about what life will be like without Jonas. Meanwhile Lily ,that day, went to her bedroom after supper and starts to cry because she thinks she lost her best friend forever. The next day Lily heads over to the playground to hopefully to recollect the memories of Jonas. Abruptly a boy sprints over to the playground. Lily greets him with a friendly “Hello”, the boy sticks his tongue out at her and scrambles up the slide. With a wild rage in his eyes. Lily warns the boy but he ignores her and Jumps off the slide to transgression the rules of the playground. The boy jumps hurts his leg by rasping the ground. Lily stands over the bawling boy and says “I told you”. It is ironic that Jonas didn’t leave her forever and she was just overreacting. Suddenly Jonas and his family pull into their driveway and leaving them with a supplementary amount of friendship.
    Team 3 period 4

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    2. The theme of this story is be a good friend.

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    3. The theme of this story is that you should ask to see if your friend is moving or if it is a trip.

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  20. In the month of December, Jonas and Lily are at the park and a new student is also there.The new kid was being beckoned to eat a cookie, but the jar was empty. Some kids were jeering at the new kid, he thought that it was ironic because he was new. The new kid was distraught by what they had said to him. The new kid then started to rage on the playground and he broke the slide and monkey bars. And a plane flew overhead and he got scared and ran inside. After he ran inside he hid behind a desk that was covered in papers. But it wasn’t palpable for his friends to find him. After a while they found him eating 100 lbs cookie dough that he found in the freezer in the teachers lounge. But while he was eating the dough he wheedled the new kid into eating the dough to make him fat too. But while they were eating the cookie dough he became intrigued with a friendship. His disposition, thoughts, were different then the mean kids that had bullied the new kid. A day later the community came and told the new kid that they didn’t like the anger in the community and they thought it was bad for the new kid. Then a plane flew over and dropped a barrel of cheesecake on accident. up. Jonas grew up 10 years late, and he became a pilot. He flew every December.

    Made By: Nate Ruggles, Hannah Lamphier, Sydney Sullivan, and James Rains
    TEAM 2 PERIOD 4

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    1. Team 1 Period 4
      The theme of this short story is, "don't judge a book by its cover."

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  21. Team 6 period 4
    Jonas and Lily were two very different sibling's. They were living with their grandma ever since they lost their mom past away on a plane crash coming back to Ohio from there December vacation.Jonas was suffering from a mental disorder ever since they lost their mom in a plane crash.Though It was palpable that Now every december or even when Jonas hears a plane fly by he has anxiety attack but It was ironic because before the accident he was a collector of model airplanes; now when he hears a plane fly by he feels distraught. Jonas sister,Lily was a very interesting child.Her disposition from a severe condition of anger management. She was jeering towards things not going her way or people disobeying the rules. She has lately been very moody about a boy from a neighboring community has been attending the play area and not following the rules. Due to this she has been yelling and screaming at everyone, when her grandmother wheedled her to clean her room ,she just erupted. Even when her grandma beckoned her to get out of there room she would try to drag herself back. After a while he grandma intrigued and took Lily to the doctors and check what was wrong. They found that she was acting this way because she didn't have her mother around. It turned out that she needed to say goodbye to her mom ,so they went to the cornfeild they crashed in and said there lasts words. Every since that day she was happier than ever

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    1. Really difficult to figure out the theme. We can't really find any lessons in here.

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    2. The theme of this story is to say what needs to be said.

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  23. Group 5, Period 5

    Jonas is anxious when he sees the plane and it affects his excited disposition.His parents and him are going on a trip to Indiana in the month of December. Jonas is apprehensive about the month of December, because he fell through the palpable ice when he was little. As Jonas arrives in Indiana he goes to the play area while his parents are getting a hotel. He meets a girl named Lilly and becomes friends with her. After playing at the play area for a while but then he ended up breaking one of the play area rules. Lilly was very upset about this. After Jonas left, Lilly jeering to her parents about her anger towards the boy who was visiting from a neighboring community and broke the play area rules. ironic huh? After Lilly’s parent heard about the incident, they went beckoning their concern to Jonas’s parents. Jonas had lied to his parents about the incident and his parents had believed him. After Lily's parents had intrigued Jonas’s parents with what Jonas had done, Jonas’s parents were deeply distraught about Jonas lying to them and was in trouble. Both Lily’s and Jonas’s parents explained to their children that the community believes that bad feelings will lead to imprudent decisions. After the parents WHEEDLED to their children they all sat down and started gossiping.

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  24. Team 6..Period 5

    Jonas a young boy from the other neighborhood realized his park was outdated and he was intrigued by the other park across the street and wanted to play, but then he heard beckoning and Lily came up to him and tried to wheedle him into climbing the WALL!!! Jonas felt distraught about the bet but he agreed. When he started climbing he realized he was breaking the rules. It was ironic to think I could break the rules Jonas thought. I feel in a state of disposition right now Jonas yelled. He decided to come down to find people jeering him. He was going home when Lily called him a wimp. He just wanted to palpable his computer at home and play some video games. When he got home he saw Lily and hid. He tried to get into his house but Lily was at the door. When he went to the door Lily “said I dare you to climb the roof.” Jonas said Move I want to play on my computer. “Ok jeez Lily” said. On the way in, Lily said “Wimp,” and then tripped him....???

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  25. Jonas is excited about December. In December, he gets to go visit his grandma, but he is scared of planes. That is why he is driving there. When he gets there, his grandma tries to beckon and wheedle him to do chores, he wasn’t very intrigued in this. He decides to go the local playground. When he gets there he meets a very moralistic girl named Lily. He walked across the grass, not seeing the sign that says not to. As a result of breaking the rules (not knowing) Lily was very mean to him, and started chewing him out. Jonas claimed that he didn’t see the sign. Lily didn’t feel like taking any of his crap, so she got angry and left. She decided to go egg his house that night. She told her grandma about her plan, but her grandma told her not to. But, being the stupid person that she was, she went anyway. How ironic. Lily’s grandma told Jonas about her plan. So, when Lily went over to his house that night, very distraught, Jonas was there waiting with the police. Everyone in town, heard about it and they started jeering at her. She went to the local Chuck E. Cheeses and was never again palpable.

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  26. PERIOD 5 GROUP 7

    Jonas was always had a lot of fears, he had a fear of spiders, ducks, needles, and footballs. His biggest fear was planes. He never was intrigued by planes. Whenever he saw a plane he always ran inside away from it, yet he never told anyone why he was afraid. Honestly, he didn’t know why he was afraid of planes either maybe it was because all the wind was palpable. Jonas also had another large fear, it was December, Jonas was always apprehensive about the month December.

    One day he went to the park and was playing on the swing. Ironically a plane flew by and he freaked out from all the bad feelings that he was feeling. He started breaking things trying to hide. Lily was getting very mad because of this. Finally the plane went by and he stopped being afraid and the whole park was ruined. Since he had all the bad feelings he made an unwise decision. Lily was very distraught, she decided to tell the park official what he did. Jonas wheedled for Lily not to tell. So instead Lily started jeering him about his fear, this was just her disposition. Jonas did not think he did anything wrong, but many people were upset about the playground. Jonas was beckoning for people to know that he destroyed the playground because he was rude. He was trying to get away from his fears.

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  28. 1-23-13
    Group 2 period 5


    Once upon a cup of tea, there was a human in middle earth named Jonas the weak. Jonas the weak was frowned upon by all who saw him, for he had a disposition of gnawing on his fingernails, and was impalpable. He was so grotesque and distraught, he was often showered with poisonous potatoes (which intrigued him, as he’d never seen poisonous potatoes before) and put in the stocks. In fact, he was treated so badly that he often stayed indoors for weeks and never went to the village market. Nobody knows what he did in this time.
    But one day, he met a girl who had a similar problem. She too, was unfortunate as well. Her name, was Lily the Lazy. They spent many days together and talked about all their dislikes, including airplanes, the month of December & the jeering kid who pushes others off the swing-set. They formed a strong bond. They plotted to one day destroy all who pelted them with rotten vegetables.
    For many days and nights they thought of their plan of revenge. It involved their good friend, Hank the Heinous. When their plan was finally finished they started their attack.
    It was all in place. This was the time to strike- Lily loaded the large, rotten potato into the catapult. Hank pulled back the rope, then released... It was magnificent! shards of rotten potato spread around for hundreds of yards, and filled the town square with the stench of 1000 stink-bombs.
    After that the community held a meeting in the courthouse. They decided that Lily, Hank & Jonas would be forever imprisoned. Then, after a few years (and lots of beckoning and wheedling from the prisoners), however, decided that they should be freed because it was the communities fault for shunning them for so long. In the end, they found out that bad feelings lead to bad decisions, which ironically, is what happened.

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  29. Nobody knew why Jonas was afraid of airplanes. He just didn’t like seeing them fly. Jonas was like that about December too. He just didn’t like the snow and the cold. Jonas also had a little sister named Lily. Even though, Jonas doesn’t like going outside in the cold, Lily always makes him go to the play area. To Jonas it was ironic that Lily liked the cold. Everytime Jonas would tell Lily no, she would wheedle him. To make her not want to go anymore, the whole walk there he was jeering towards Lily.
    When they got to the play area, there was a kid from a neighboring town. She didn’t want him palpable. He was climbing up the slides and doing back flips off of them. Lily quickly started beckoning to Jonas. Jonas was intrigued, so he ran over quickly. When he got there, he realized Lily was distraught.They immediately left, after Jonas realized just how distraught his sister really was. When they got home, items within the house had be dispositioned.

    So, they went over to the town library and saw that most of the town people were gathered. They were talking about the kid in the play area. Some of the town people were saying that the kid was being abused at home and he took his bad feelings out there. They said that the bad feelings could lead to unwise decisions like the kid did earlier. So, they just put the parents in jail,walked away, and forgot about the whole thing.

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  30. Lily and Jonas
    Jonas is a young boy who is afraid of planes because his dad died in a plane. He also doesn’t like December because he has a poor family and doesn’t get presents on Christmas. Jonas’s friend, Lily, went to Jonas’s house and told him that a boy broke the rules at the play area. Lily was jeering about the boy. The boy did this because he was distraught over losing one of his friends in his other community. Since he lost his friend it made him make an unwise decision. Lily and Jonas’s community believe that bad feelings can make people make unwise decisions. So then the boy appoligized to the community and Christmas was just around the corner. After he apologized to the community he heard jonas’s story he beckoned him then wheedled him and then gave him a plane for Christmas. After he got his present he got a happy disposition. Then he said,”That was ironic.” Jonas was very intrigued in the plane and that it was palpable;That made the boy very happy.

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  31. Period 6 Table 5
    Jonas lived in a place without many people and didn’t know how society works. He is going on a trip with with dad. He soon found out he was going to fly to Canada from Arizona. He didn’t like this idea since he was moving to warm to cold climate, and has never been on a plane before. A few weeks passed when Jonas had to fly to Canada. When Jonas got off his plan he was distraught by the sound it made. As he went to get his luggage, a boy named Toby told him lies about how things worked here, at the time he did not know that, he was in a disposition. When Jonas got to his new house. There was a park across his new house. There was a girl named Lily sitting in the snow. Jonas went to the park. With what Toby said he began to break things and throw snow at passing people. Lily was sharing her feelings of distraught regarding Jonas who was visiting the community park and breaks the rules by what he had done,in a loud, jeering voice. Charlie a very good pedestrian and was intrigued by his odd behavior . Charlie told Lily to show him where Jonas was, Lily obediently walked to the park. When Charlie and Lily found Jonas still at the park. Charlie was beckoned to Jonas.Charlie was able to wheedle his way into the community council and was able to change their decision in his favor and not Jonas’s. After he did that and he left his mouth curved up into an ironic smile. After a long day at the park Jonas was so happy to sink into his soft bed and palpable the soft blankets. Jonas soon realized that breaking the rules at the park even if it wasn’t his fault was not good and he soon got in trouble by his parents.

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  32. Period 6,
    One day Jonas and his family were on an airplane in the month of December and something ironic happened . Out of nowhere the plane went into some turbulence and suddenly began to spiral downwards. He was really close to the crash site that it is palpable, He could touch it. The other survivors of the crash were looking around and making jeering comments to him for some odd reason.Then after that Jonas walked away and to this day has always hated planes and December, because it happened in December on a plane. He felt against the world and Beckoned “Why did this have to happen to me!”

    when he got into town he jeered nearly everyone he met but when he met a little girl named Lily it was different. When he first saw her he was so excited to meet her and From this day on meeting her changed his unhappy disposition. They became such good of friends they would always comfort each other in their time of need. If needed they would wheedle each other into things that make them happier.

    Then Some weird things happened in the next 5 years though they both went through changes made new friends and didn’t talk during that whole time until they finally met each other in the park one day in december. They were both glancing at a plane and he finally came out and told lily what happened to him. Lily was so shocked and even know she was intrigued to stay she decided to say “oh I didnt know im so sorry.” Then walked away. They were both distraught and They never talked again after that.

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